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i really love your artwork! it's very pretty and vibrant!. immaa favorite it!.
and also do you know someone who can edit this story for me? if so please link them
and also the name of the story is called "dan vs love" alright here's the story i'll post it down below
[scene one 10:48 pm inside dan's house]
(the screen fades into the dan vs logo which also fades away it shows dan lying in his bed wearing nothing but his boxer's as he's looking at a picture of Hortence in her wedding dress he start's crying for a few second's as tears are falling from his eyes to the sides of his bed dan gently put's the picture frame on the ground after which he just stares blankly at the ceiling - the scene transitions to day time at chris's house with him and elise watching tv in their living room together when chris brings up something)
CHRIS: huh, that's weird?.
ELISE: what?.
CHRIS: usually I would get a call from dan, to help him with his “revenge schemes” or something. it just feel's weird
ELISE: then don't worry about it. The only thing that matters is i'm here with you!.
CHRIS: yeah i'm sure your right, and besides i've got my own stuff to worry about.
(the scene transitions back to dan now fully clothed in his apartment hanging a rope from his ceiling while standing on a chair )
DAN: if I can't find love here, I won't be able to find it anywhere...
(as dan was putting the rope collar around his neck mr mumbles just happen to walk by)
MR MUMBLES: meow?.
DAN: not now mr mumbles i'm on the verge of death right now.
MR MUMBLES: meoooooooow??.
DAN: yes I know this sounds unorthodox but, what choice do I have in this?.
MR MUMBLES: meooooooooooooooooooow???
DAN: well I suppose paying a trip to burgerphile for one last time wouldn't kill me. metaphorically speaking anyway...
MR MUMBLES: meow!!!
(after that the scene cuts to dan walking in burgerphile looking around the place sighing in sadness with a short line in front of him after the lady in front got her food and left to which dan walks up to the counter and orders a hamburger without cheese as he was going to find a table a 22 year old redheaded girl batting a eye at dan asking if he was okay)
??? um, Excuse me sir but whats wrong?.
DAN: um why do you care anyway?.
???: i'm a psychiatrist. I specialize in talking to crazy or depressed people like yourself.
DAN: well that's, convenient I guess.
???: great!. Now let's see what exactly is your problem.
DAN: well... there was this girl whom i've had a crush on, but when I told her my fillings she rejected me. and married some other guy I tried to shrug it off over the months but every time I think or see anything that reminds me of her it makes me wanna kill myself from the Impending sadness what do you recommend doctor?.
???: first off i'm a psychiatrist not a doctor, and second maybe you need a good women in your life?.
DAN: and me thinks i've seen the perfect one in front of me!.
???: (blush) oh gee!, your making me blush.
DAN: wow!. I've never seen a girl this red before!.
???: thanks. I guess...
DAN: so, whats your name?.
???: my name is dana sworth, and you?.
DAN: i'm dan.
DANA: dan what?.
DAN: just dan alright?. (ding)
DAN: sweet! My orders done!.
(as dan gets up from his seat to pick up the food chris and elise just happen to walk into burgerphile when chris and elise notice dan walking back to his seat with a girl sitting across him they decide to go over and talk to them)
CHRIS: hey dan!, who's this your with?.
DANA: hello my name is dana sworth!, it's very nice to meet you!.
CHRIS: (shakes hand) likewise i'm chris and this is elise,
ELISE: hi, and I suppose you two are dating huh?.
DANA: well given the fact that we only know each other for a few minutes I say yes.
ELISE: well that's kinda weird, never thought dan could get a date...
DAN: I heard that!!!, and plus the lady's love me!.
ELISE: they must have really low standards to find you attractive.
DAN: ses the person who married chris!.
CHRIS: hey!, I'm right here you know!.
DAN: -_- do I look like i give a crap?.
CHRIS: (quietly) no...
DAN: cmon dana, let's get out of here away from all of these jerks!. (grabs her arm)
DANA: um, where are we going?.
(dan and dana walked out of burgerphile while chris and elise have a confused look on there face as the screen fades to black)
[scene two- 5:32pm inside dan's apartment]
(the screen fades back in showing dan and dana on the couch kissing passionately when mr mumbles walks in on them)
MR MUMBLES: meow? Meow? Meooooooooow??
DANA: (stops kissing) um dan?, I think your cat want something. (points down)
DAN: (looks down at mr mumbles) look mr mumbles, i'm kinda of busy here i'll feed you later!. (they go back to kissing)
(after which mr mumbles walks into dan's bedroom with a sad face of being ignored by her owner-)
DANA: (stops kissing) oh dan!, we need to take our relationship further!.
DAN: um, what do you mean by that?.
(dana whispers in dan's left ear with dan giving off a shocking reaction)
DAN: wow!. (blush) do-do-doing that on the first date???,
DANA: of course! Silly dilly!,
DAN: I don't know... this seems like something that should wait until the second date, and plus didn't we just meet a few short hours ago?.
DANA: perhaps but I thought guys would kill for a body like this? (she moves her hands up and down to show him her body- as she and dan were about kiss some more a knock can be heard on the door dan gets up from the couch to answer it when it turns out to be chris)
CHRIS: hey dan whats up?.
DAN: chris?, why are you here?.
CHRIS: don't tell me you forgot?.
DAN: forgot what?.
CHRIS: the new population johnny movie that's in theaters tonight.
DAN: and why are you telling me this?.
CHRIS: remember?, (shows a flashback of dan and chris walking towards a poster on a window at burgerphile that says the one the only good movie series in the world population johnny 7 revival) about a month ago you said “chris!, when this movie comes out please remind me!.” (snaps back to the present) and one month later here I am telling you all this!.
DAN:hmmm. I guess it slipped from my mind...
CHRIS: soooo are you ready to go?, Or do you need a minute?.
DANA: dan?. Who's that your talking to?. Is it chris? Or elise?.
DAN: it's no one!. Okay bye now!,
CHRIS: but dan! (as dan slams the door in his face- the scene cuts to chris's house with him watching tv and eating a turkey sandwich when dan burst through the door saying)
DAN: I got poontang!.
CHRIS: huh?. You did?.
DAN: that's right!
CHRIS: never thought you'd reach that far with a lady... but hey you proved me wrong!.
Dan: yep!, now shut up and give me a ride!.
CHRIS: (sigh) sure dan where to?.
DAN: um... good question hey writer!. (yelling)
ME: what is it?.
DAN: how do we continue the story from here?.
ME: well let's see um...... muffin button?
DAN AND CHRIS: what???
ME: sorry, that's all I got.
DAN: gee, talk about a useless writer here huh chris?.
CHRIS: I guess.
ME: useless!? Ok how about I just end this story?.
(dan and chris gasped in shock)
DAN: oh yeah?, I dare you! I double dare you motherfu!.
[the end written by bfstall1]
and also do you know someone who can edit this story for me? if so please link them
and also the name of the story is called "dan vs love" alright here's the story i'll post it down below
[scene one 10:48 pm inside dan's house]
(the screen fades into the dan vs logo which also fades away it shows dan lying in his bed wearing nothing but his boxer's as he's looking at a picture of Hortence in her wedding dress he start's crying for a few second's as tears are falling from his eyes to the sides of his bed dan gently put's the picture frame on the ground after which he just stares blankly at the ceiling - the scene transitions to day time at chris's house with him and elise watching tv in their living room together when chris brings up something)
CHRIS: huh, that's weird?.
ELISE: what?.
CHRIS: usually I would get a call from dan, to help him with his “revenge schemes” or something. it just feel's weird
ELISE: then don't worry about it. The only thing that matters is i'm here with you!.
CHRIS: yeah i'm sure your right, and besides i've got my own stuff to worry about.
(the scene transitions back to dan now fully clothed in his apartment hanging a rope from his ceiling while standing on a chair )
DAN: if I can't find love here, I won't be able to find it anywhere...
(as dan was putting the rope collar around his neck mr mumbles just happen to walk by)
MR MUMBLES: meow?.
DAN: not now mr mumbles i'm on the verge of death right now.
MR MUMBLES: meoooooooow??.
DAN: yes I know this sounds unorthodox but, what choice do I have in this?.
MR MUMBLES: meooooooooooooooooooow???
DAN: well I suppose paying a trip to burgerphile for one last time wouldn't kill me. metaphorically speaking anyway...
MR MUMBLES: meow!!!
(after that the scene cuts to dan walking in burgerphile looking around the place sighing in sadness with a short line in front of him after the lady in front got her food and left to which dan walks up to the counter and orders a hamburger without cheese as he was going to find a table a 22 year old redheaded girl batting a eye at dan asking if he was okay)
??? um, Excuse me sir but whats wrong?.
DAN: um why do you care anyway?.
???: i'm a psychiatrist. I specialize in talking to crazy or depressed people like yourself.
DAN: well that's, convenient I guess.
???: great!. Now let's see what exactly is your problem.
DAN: well... there was this girl whom i've had a crush on, but when I told her my fillings she rejected me. and married some other guy I tried to shrug it off over the months but every time I think or see anything that reminds me of her it makes me wanna kill myself from the Impending sadness what do you recommend doctor?.
???: first off i'm a psychiatrist not a doctor, and second maybe you need a good women in your life?.
DAN: and me thinks i've seen the perfect one in front of me!.
???: (blush) oh gee!, your making me blush.
DAN: wow!. I've never seen a girl this red before!.
???: thanks. I guess...
DAN: so, whats your name?.
???: my name is dana sworth, and you?.
DAN: i'm dan.
DANA: dan what?.
DAN: just dan alright?. (ding)
DAN: sweet! My orders done!.
(as dan gets up from his seat to pick up the food chris and elise just happen to walk into burgerphile when chris and elise notice dan walking back to his seat with a girl sitting across him they decide to go over and talk to them)
CHRIS: hey dan!, who's this your with?.
DANA: hello my name is dana sworth!, it's very nice to meet you!.
CHRIS: (shakes hand) likewise i'm chris and this is elise,
ELISE: hi, and I suppose you two are dating huh?.
DANA: well given the fact that we only know each other for a few minutes I say yes.
ELISE: well that's kinda weird, never thought dan could get a date...
DAN: I heard that!!!, and plus the lady's love me!.
ELISE: they must have really low standards to find you attractive.
DAN: ses the person who married chris!.
CHRIS: hey!, I'm right here you know!.
DAN: -_- do I look like i give a crap?.
CHRIS: (quietly) no...
DAN: cmon dana, let's get out of here away from all of these jerks!. (grabs her arm)
DANA: um, where are we going?.
(dan and dana walked out of burgerphile while chris and elise have a confused look on there face as the screen fades to black)
[scene two- 5:32pm inside dan's apartment]
(the screen fades back in showing dan and dana on the couch kissing passionately when mr mumbles walks in on them)
MR MUMBLES: meow? Meow? Meooooooooow??
DANA: (stops kissing) um dan?, I think your cat want something. (points down)
DAN: (looks down at mr mumbles) look mr mumbles, i'm kinda of busy here i'll feed you later!. (they go back to kissing)
(after which mr mumbles walks into dan's bedroom with a sad face of being ignored by her owner-)
DANA: (stops kissing) oh dan!, we need to take our relationship further!.
DAN: um, what do you mean by that?.
(dana whispers in dan's left ear with dan giving off a shocking reaction)
DAN: wow!. (blush) do-do-doing that on the first date???,
DANA: of course! Silly dilly!,
DAN: I don't know... this seems like something that should wait until the second date, and plus didn't we just meet a few short hours ago?.
DANA: perhaps but I thought guys would kill for a body like this? (she moves her hands up and down to show him her body- as she and dan were about kiss some more a knock can be heard on the door dan gets up from the couch to answer it when it turns out to be chris)
CHRIS: hey dan whats up?.
DAN: chris?, why are you here?.
CHRIS: don't tell me you forgot?.
DAN: forgot what?.
CHRIS: the new population johnny movie that's in theaters tonight.
DAN: and why are you telling me this?.
CHRIS: remember?, (shows a flashback of dan and chris walking towards a poster on a window at burgerphile that says the one the only good movie series in the world population johnny 7 revival) about a month ago you said “chris!, when this movie comes out please remind me!.” (snaps back to the present) and one month later here I am telling you all this!.
DAN:hmmm. I guess it slipped from my mind...
CHRIS: soooo are you ready to go?, Or do you need a minute?.
DANA: dan?. Who's that your talking to?. Is it chris? Or elise?.
DAN: it's no one!. Okay bye now!,
CHRIS: but dan! (as dan slams the door in his face- the scene cuts to chris's house with him watching tv and eating a turkey sandwich when dan burst through the door saying)
DAN: I got poontang!.
CHRIS: huh?. You did?.
DAN: that's right!
CHRIS: never thought you'd reach that far with a lady... but hey you proved me wrong!.
Dan: yep!, now shut up and give me a ride!.
CHRIS: (sigh) sure dan where to?.
DAN: um... good question hey writer!. (yelling)
ME: what is it?.
DAN: how do we continue the story from here?.
ME: well let's see um...... muffin button?
DAN AND CHRIS: what???
ME: sorry, that's all I got.
DAN: gee, talk about a useless writer here huh chris?.
CHRIS: I guess.
ME: useless!? Ok how about I just end this story?.
(dan and chris gasped in shock)
DAN: oh yeah?, I dare you! I double dare you motherfu!.
[the end written by bfstall1]